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February 20, 2007

Make a Change

Filed under: ESL Students' Writings — ytcaples @ 10:53

There are things we would all like to change about the world around us. Tell a story about a change you would make.

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  1. I would make a change after I entered middle school. When I was in the elementary school, I was just silence and blunt. But after I entered middle school, I got many friends, and changed more activitily. My mom always wanted me to be more activitily so I was very proud of me. I really enjoyed to school. Also I came here I got many changes. At first I didn’t know what am I supposed to do, and so confused. But now I really enjoy and like to live here, and adapted here gradually, I think. I heard that the life is full of changes, surprises, and choices. I think it’s truly true. Maybe I’ll get so many changed in my future, and I hope it’ll make be more better.

    Comment by Haeeun Lee — February 20, 2007 @ 11:24

  2. There are a lot of things I would like to chang about the world around us.
    The most important things to chang is War. I hope there is no War on earth. Because if there is a war, than there’s going to be a lot of damage to human, and it will waste a lot of money too. So I hope there will be no war. The second important thing is CO2. If CO2 are still increasing all the ice on North pole will be water and a lot of the city will be under water. Like the movie the The last day. Co2 can make ice into water, all the animals at North pole will have no where to stay. So I wish there’s no more
    CO2.

    Comment by Kyle liang — February 20, 2007 @ 11:28

  3. I would like to change everything countries in the world except U.S.A. because
    i would change those countries to American’s style. Language, all the countries
    will only speak English, that will be the greatest thing cause everyone will communicate easier. School, all the countries will be the American ‘s School
    style, because i kind of like the way to study in America and the Freedom of
    what we wanted to wear, no more uniform that will be the most owesome thing for
    the Asian people. Freedom, not all of the country in the world that has Freedom,
    but one i know is America, the free of what we wanted to do and everything.

    Comment by Busarakham Traising — February 20, 2007 @ 11:32

  4. I well take all the kids i dont like and no school just sleep and just cill with the homie and all that stuff just stay hom and cill with the homie having party like every day it well be so much fun so yah its cool it was like that i well so like i said i well take all the foos i dont like and my life well way!!!!!!beter to yah but that never going to happen so yah but if it happen i well do all that and just have fun and enjoy life party ever day going out being with your lady and all that stuff so yah it wood be so much fun if it was that way for me i will so happy just not lot of school but not every day so yah and like i say lot and im going to say agin all the kids or all the pepole i dont want them here so yah just me and my family and all the homie and kids i like and poeple dont notting it well be so much fun it was like that just take all the haters out but i mean all the hater out of my face so i well chang all that so yah i thing that it for to day.

    Comment by israel higuera — February 20, 2007 @ 12:41

  5. I would like to change many bad things about the world. I would change the war, because on wars people kill other people and the fight all the time, and sometimes because they want something that the other country has. And the pople lost alot of money on wars. I would like to change the contamination, because the contamination is really bad for our world and the world is more contaminated each day, and we need the world clean to survive. And other thing that i would like to change is the poor people, I don’t like to see that they can eat because they don’t have money to buy food or clothes. And sometimes people that have alot of money buy food that they are not going to eat. That is why we have to help each other. Everybody need this things to survive.

    Comment by AlejandraC. — February 20, 2007 @ 12:43

  6. change?!!! I don’t know. I am only know that I make a change after I get to USA….I know why…Maybe this is a good things or a bad things. But I hope that is change better. There are so many things to change. Family, students, and school….all things. but maybe I am me..i don’t know how to do, I only know that i want to come back to my country…

    Comment by Jichen — February 20, 2007 @ 12:43

  7. I change the war i dont like. i change all families have house and the other thing i change the people bad for good person. some boys are bad in us and is very bad i dont like bad mens they dont have family because they are bad and they go to the prision you know some guys in usa are bad and dont have concience they are many boys sometimes there in gangs or in other they sale droug and is very bad i dont like the people sale droug and guns when the people kill people for droug is very bad i dont know wat they think they are sicopatas i dont know i change the violence for the soccer i like the soccer i dont change the soccer. i change all bad in this word the terrorist is very bad i change the people poor and the sale droug and kill people ok ♥♣♠ ok bye :)

    Comment by irvinv — February 20, 2007 @ 12:43

  8. I would like change language. Because many country have different language so people have problem to communicate. It is good to many countries have their own language and that language have their culture. But I want to make common language of all countries like sign language. Then we don’t need to study many other language to speak other country’s people. We should study only two language.(one is their own language and another is common language of world.) If our communication is easy people can go trip anywhere that they aren’t worried about communication. And If our communication is easy people can have many other countries’ friends. And we don’t need to go other country to study language. So I would like to change language system of world.

    Comment by Amy lee — February 20, 2007 @ 12:43

  9. I wouldn’t. It’s enough. it’s satisfied. but I wolud one thing that make change, it’s satisfied life. maybe all people think it’s enough, and they’re satisfied their life, they must be happy. then, no more crime, no more war, no more fight. but most of people like better life. they want to make change want to better life. they like make money.
    so, I think my life is enough. it’s satisfied.

    Comment by Hae Kim — February 20, 2007 @ 12:44

  10. I’m not understand good the of make a cahangebut I think what for make a change I need some hard for make my change like when I’m bad in my classes I need make change in my reports and make my major work for be the best in the school is idea and another diference is when there are some war in some country the people is scary and the little kids died alot people die in this typs or wars broke the heart od a lot people and when the war is finish alot people change for hve a good life in the future because some people traveling at another country like here in the united estates and the people think I need a good life for my and my childrens and my wife and is when a lot people say I need a make a change in mi life I think is when make a change .

    Comment by jessica moran2907 — February 20, 2007 @ 12:46

  11. I would like change the way as the foreign see Brazil, someone see Brazil as a country that only there are Amazonia, monkeys, indians… other as a country with a lot cimes… but here, is very different!!

    Comment by Alisson Patrício — February 23, 2007 @ 08:41

  12. I would change the way i thinking off. Sometimes, i felt no confidence about my ability. But now i trying to make sure that i have lots capablity. The most important things, i have learning much about anything because become a smart girl and absorp lots knowledge and information are really needed.At the end,i would say that on 2007 i have more exploring my potensials coz it’s really necessary for my future life.

    Comment by Milly Mignon — February 26, 2007 @ 05:14

  13. bandana
    I’ve changed a lot since I got here and also i have changed the year when i joined Silverado High School which was two years ago. I’m really proud to be a student of Silverdo High School because it has taught me lots of things. I have change a lot i think because when I was in my previous school I was scared of teahers, I didn’t had any guts to walk in front of guys, i was a very shy person. I used to turn red and nervous when it was my turn to do presentation. But now i feel very proud of my self because I don’t feel shy or nervous doing my presentation, I also don’t have problems talking to guys.I think I’ve improved since i got here the environment here is very different according to my previous town where I used to live.

    Comment by bandana paija — March 22, 2007 @ 13:21

  14. in this world we have to change to many things like violence we have nice world i dont want to have a son and my son see all the violence that we have rigth now and i dont get why people get poor is only because they dont like work.

    Comment by deigo — March 22, 2007 @ 14:13

  15. If i could make a change in the world i would try my best to fight with poverty and make it go away. I dont think it’s fair that some people eat everyday and be happy and have everything and on the other hand some people starve to death or kill themselves just to leave this disasteress world. According to the news 800000 people (mostly children) go to sleep with an empty stomach and this is just terrible. We should really try to make poverty go away. and also the poor people should work and try to get themselves out of this disaster so everyone would be happy and enjoy the life in the best way that they can. Lets hope that someday this dream would come true.

    Comment by MoHaMmAd — March 22, 2007 @ 14:15

  16. well the world where we live in is full of inequality and unhappy event !
    after that human claim that they became modern we have war all around the world , we have people who don’t have anything to eat , we have people who behave unrespectfuly against childeren and women , we have people who kill others and even don’t pity to animals !
    All this unpleasent stuff is a part of our world that I am acutely against it !
    I want to change this world and make another world , a world full of happines , a peaceful palce for human where peiople are free and equal where rudness against childeren is crim and where everybody can be happy !
    this is my hope ,I hope someday I can do it
    thanks

    Comment by mike — April 1, 2007 @ 23:20

  17. I hope to change many things in the world . One of these is war and it happens only in the past and peace comes into the world . I hope all the children around the earth have a nice life ( good food,sweets,education,medicine…etc).
    I would like to change somepeople’s attitude but not all things in them peronality if I can . My self, I have many things tuat I want change it for better .
    We all hope to change the world and people to become better.

    Comment by Mashael — June 10, 2007 @ 23:58

  18. Our world needs lots of changes, but there are two which have the same importance, such as global pollution and wars. Everyone needs to cooperate to save our planet. If we stop using chemicals that damage the ozone and throwing waste in our lakes, we will make a difference. We only have one earth, and if we keep destroying it, we will destroy ourselves and future generations.
    Another big problem is the war. War brings many consequences around the world and many people suffer from them. We need to let our political leaders know about the negative side of the wars, and let them know that not everything is power in this world.

    Comment by vanessaaaaa — July 31, 2007 @ 20:48

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